
Inspired by “On Your Knees” by Mosab Abu Toha
The desert wind whispers secrets through my backpack, secrets of children’s laughter muffled by winter clothes. One small hand clutches mine, a three-year-old trust born in a world beyond borders. Passports flutter defiance in the other hand, testaments to a life fractured by lines on a map.
My wife and our precious cargo meander ahead, a thirst for normalcy battling the dust. A soldier’s voice shatters, not with a question, but a description, stripping humanity bare. Nameless, stateless, adrift in a storm of confusion.
Guns bristle, a metallic ballet against the canvas of a relentless sun. The echo of distant shelling paints a grim portrait of a world gone mad. A guttural command rips through the air: “Drop everything!”
But I am not a thing to be discarded. Dignity, a shield against the storm, rises in my chest.
The soldier’s voice, laced with a twisted familiarity, speaks my full name, even whispers the name of my grandfather. A flicker of warmth ignites within, quickly extinguished by the icy grip of hate for the man, the uniform, the system.
Demands for ID, a brutal stripping away of privacy. My ears become sanctuaries, harboring the echoes of my mother’s stories, my father’s comforting chants, the gentle tick of a clock marking the start of another school day – a normalcy stolen.
“How many passports?” the question hangs heavy, a weapon of bureaucracy. Each document, a desperate plea for passage. We are a family, bound by love, not lines drawn on paper. The destination: a crossing, a gateway to a fragile hope.
Silence descends, a suffocating cloak punctuated by a barked profanity. “Teacher?” the soldier mocks, a cruel twist of the identity I hold dear. But a teacher cannot impart wisdom from his knees.
Blindfolded, handcuffed, the world shrinks to a brutal shove. Each barked command, “On your knees!” a hammer blow to the spirit. The accusation hangs heavy: “Terrorist!” A word devoid of truth, fueled by fear.
Pain explodes in a symphony of kicks, a metallic tang of blood fills my nostrils. The world blurs, a kaleidoscope of sand and sky. Yet, a defiant spark remains, a flicker of humanity refusing to be extinguished.
The journey stretches into an eternity. The desert, a vast canvas painted with the silent suffering of others. A shared sob pierces the silence, a desperate plea for a wife, a child, a life on hold.
“We are on our knees!” the anguished cry echoes. But even on their knees, the human spirit endures.
A truck, a brutal lurch, then silence. The desert reclaims its dominion. We are deposited, human flotsam cast upon a foreign shore. The sting of another kick, a final indignity.
But then, a whisper, a shift in tone. “A mistake,” the soldier murmurs in a foreign tongue. “We are taking you home.”
Home. A bittersweet word, a promise laced with the scars of a journey etched into the soul.
Link to original poem: https://poems.poetrysociety.org.uk/poems/


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